My only comments are 1. in paragraph 2 you should say that she did not remarry or enter into a civil partnership. 2. Delete reference to next of kin which is not recognised in Scots law. 3. You need IN RESPECT WHEREOF and a signature under the crave as well as after the plea in law. Other than that it looks fine. The court fee is £18 payable to the Scottish Courts and Tribunal Service. I hope that helps. Please leave a positive rating so that I am credited for my time.